Ok i have to say one of my biggest pet peeves is when people put down their work in the title of the thread. I'm seeing a lot of "another sci fi.....generic sci fi.....lame sci fi" If it's generic, you probably shouldn't be making it. It's not going to get you pity, and it's not going to get you a job.
looks awesome man. my only crit would be having the light above the door to be colder, i associate sci-fi and especially id sci-fi with colder high contrast lighting