What? Noooooo. Looks solid. Biggest issue I see is the tiny bricks on the right and huge bricks on the left. The waste barrels seem a bit pudgy too. Make them taller.
You might want to check your proportions. Your guy is looking a bit short and bulky, when Batman Beyond is usually taller and slimmer. I think narrowing the chest and solders would help match the concept better.
I'd make the room taller everything seems squished (the drapes and the squarish windows compared to the tall rectangular shapes of the concept). Staircase doesn't seem as grand. Don't forget to add the top piece to your pillars (the square piece).
cheers :) im having a little bit of perspective issues with the arm and the more i adjust the less space ex takes up, i wonder if making the canvase taller n scaling ez up would help :S
Very interesting design! Made more sense when you said its a sub/tug boat hybrid. I would suggest that the periscope needs to be taller IMO to work properly though. Looking forward to seeing textures
The ridge along the top of the barrel is taller in the concept, and the final flare into the fore sight is missing entirely in your version. The bell curve of the barrel should be less dramatic, and the curve is more gradual rather than just a straight bend.
Long time halo fan, first time caller. Dude, Will. I don't have any crits. Just to say holy moses you nailed this scene. Atmospherically, feels just like the game. Congrats my man!
Something about the poses seem a bit too inorganic, or just unnatural. I don't know if that's just me, but the ballet pose especially sticks out to me in this way. I dunno though.
@Ewan Nice to learn what scale you extracted from the concept :+1: I think it's a bit of a balancing act between capturing the feel of the concept and having a good play space. I suppose if one wanted to keep the concepts feel of verticality, the pillars could be made taller so the room proportions are preserved. Here is…
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