Looking good I have followed this to see where it will go, one small piece of advice I would give though is that you should focus on making one room to the finish first before you move on to other rooms. Now do not take that the wrong way, I love how you have planned out several rooms however with each room you are adding…
Very nice :) this has a solid and clear story beat, and the scene has a
great foundation. As you continue refining it, consider pushing the secondary
storytelling details further. Adding personal items—such as photos, handwritten
notes, or scattered everyday tools—could hint at who lived here and deepen the
narrative.…
very nice scene! i don't really like the light shafts however: you normally see them when you are in a room that is much darker than the outside or a single light source that shines into the room. (for examples just google for "light shaft"...) in this case however, it seems to be night outside and you have a room that is…