Looks fantastic, a pisstake with more than just the standard yank toilet humour. There hasnt been a good pisstake of the superhero franchises since Mystery Men. r.
Gaunt or not, no cheeks are that pointy. You have the verts to play with so no reason not to give a few a pull and round out the point, while still keeping the gauntyness aspect of it.
ive been lurkin here for a while, thought id introduce myself to a few of the peeps who havnt been annoyed by me on other sites by pimpin my most recent crap PSP Porco rosso plane and hideout.