Added a little bit more detail on the pillars and the bows above them wich hopefully don't look too edgy. I'm calling the modeling on these two parts done, except someone has something to say against that. Comments and crits are always nice to see! :)
i would add some AO behind the teeth. They are looking like not conneceted to the rest. I guess you tried, but maybe it looks better when the pupil´s are not stretched and a thin dark line around the eyeball would hide the edgy form from the polygons.
This year of my life is all about finishing stuff I started. After three attempts, I finally made it through Thomas Pynchon's "V.". I feel good about that, even though I still have no idea what the fnucking halaal it was about. Not that I'm alone in that. After a while I guess I'll try 'Gravity's Rainbow' again. Now I'm…
looks like transformers to me from a design perspective: flashy and edgy. Reminds me also alot of the japanese 'Decotora' pimped trucks in somewhat flashy style: you can find more of it here: http://www.darkroastedblend.com/2006/11/electric-light-truck-decoration-in.html
i think the main problem is that he looks too edgy still. maybe you shouldve spared some polys where it wouldnt have been as obvious and given them to the nose and eyebrows and the parts that influence the shape most. i could be wrong tho.. maybe post a wireframe?
I am totally dig'n this guy! I would make a crit though, I know you are going for an organic feel with the metal, but it's starting to get muddy around the edges of the plates, and the depth/thickness of the plates is getting lost, I did a quick paintover to help explain.. Original: Edgy:
hah i still remember the discussions back then. there were more then enough people who believed it. only at further inspection they saw its prerendered i kinda doubt its an official screenshot. doesnt really show anything special or unique and the edgy shadow on the wall looks a bit unfortunate
Yo mamas so dumb and fat, everyone makes terrible jokes about her. Your opinions are so edgy, turbosmooth retains shape. Your momma only had you because she forgot to turn on autoback. Your mother is an .obj , everyone uses her. Oh and: Blender. (not really)
i really like it looks awesome :), but i think in fps view the the back of the slide should be rounder compared to the concept ,yours looks to edgy and the concept has this kinda hard edge but still its more circular. i made a little paintover so u can see what i mean.
his medal thingie is coming from the shoudlers not his neck http://www.vnn.vn/vnn4/pic_story/story6-pocahontas/picture/p2.jpg http://www.geocities.com/TheTropics/Resort/4986/govrat.gif i think a little more flow (more loops) in his hair wouldn't hurt it's pretty edgy compared to his face