DWIV - 3D - Luban

Luban · Mar 2009

Hi, here you can see my latest. Z-brush progress

Luban · Mar 2009

This is my first sketch

rooster · Mar 2009

worm limbs are great, my favourite part of the concept- I think itd be good to have more of a transition into normal top half, at the moment its worms, worms, worms, person!
so, some more overall unity in the concept would be good, but it's a solid start

keep at it!

Luban · Mar 2009

Rooster- Thanks for suggestion with transition:)

Jarvgrimr · Mar 2009

I think the torso needs to blend into the tentacle legs a bit better, even though it is an abomination-type creature it looks too bitty.

Are those dreadlocks on the head? They match the legs a bit too much i reckon, maybe 'cuz the legs are cactusy you should try and incorporate some plant stylings in there?

Luban · Mar 2009

Jarvgrimr wrote: »

I think the torso needs to blend into the tentacle legs a bit better, even though it is an abomination-type creature it looks too bitty.

Are those dreadlocks on the head? They match the legs a bit too much i reckon, maybe 'cuz the legs are cactusy you should try and incorporate some plant stylings in there?

On the head I want do tentacle as legs, but with any metal artefacts and without spikes. The tentacle legs are worm, not cactusy XD, but demon have needles stick over. thx for comment:)

Luban · Mar 2009

my next sketches..I was rebuild my previous idea.

woogity · Mar 2009

hey man like the idea behind this, very nasty. the form of the head could use a little work. and if the worm parts transitioned more smoothly into the torso i think it would seem more natural. right now the connection is a little perpendicular and abrupt. worm dreads are great tho man. also being a worm, and thus boneless, his posture would look a bit more natural if he slumped over, the worm bits on his torso could use a little more wriggleyness i think as well KEEP ON IT!

o face refrence maybe?

http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_LbccUVbSRd8/R_Bmc7Wq9XI/AAAAAAAAB0o/dehy8IlZEUM/s400/Hagfish.jpg

-Woog

Jarvgrimr · Mar 2009

Looking much better mate. The overall build of the character looks better, more believable. Maybe giving the torso tendrils more 'wriggleyness' as woogity said would help, or mixing some of the tentacles with a sort of lamprey mouth:

http://images.google.com/images?oe=UTF-8&sourceid=navclient&gfns=1&q=lamprey%20fish&um=1&ie=UTF-8&sa=N&hl=en&tab=wi

Ugly little things but maybe giving all those tentacles some gaping maws they can take bits of hapless humans too would be cool.

Keep at it mate!

Luban · Mar 2009

Woogity and Jarvgrimr, thanks for inspiration, I shall try it

Luban · Mar 2009

Here is some sketch his heads. I like A2

Luban · Mar 2009

Maybe this is my finished concept. Now I want start with making references and after I will start with modeling.

Luban · Apr 2009

So, after thinking about my idea, I was persuade that my concept missing some specific unit. He is uninteresting and feeble. So I get new idea. I have only thumb, no concept, but main image about design I save in my head:)

Luban · Apr 2009

So here is my thumb

Luban · Apr 2009

My base model. I think that this look better that previous design:D

Luban · Apr 2009

ZBrush in progress

Luban · May 2009

upper part of body

DWIV - 3D - Luban

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