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LEViATHAN
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1000 triangles (head eats over 1/3rd of it).
Something feels off but can't really pinpoint the problem, hoping for suggestions and such. Obviously still on symmetry, but will change that later.

Still need to do the gear.
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  • Japhir
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    Japhir polycounter lvl 16
    he has a pear shape to his torso (hips wide, upper body small). wearing a wide pants is fine, but usually the hip area itself isn't that wide. and maybe add some interesting sleeves to break the arm silhouette up a bit.
    other than that it looks really good!
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  • LEViATHAN
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    LEViATHAN polycounter lvl 11
    Japhir wrote: »
    he has a pear shape to his torso (hips wide, upper body small). wearing a wide pants is fine, but usually the hip area itself isn't that wide. and maybe add some interesting sleeves to break the arm silhouette up a bit.
    other than that it looks really good!

    Hmm, the pants they wore were very baggy, so I made the upper legs wider, which contributes to the pear-shape. I'll see what I can do about that.
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  • Harry
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    Harry polycounter lvl 13
    i have refs for australian uniforms if you wanna convert him afterwardsoioi.gif
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  • LEViATHAN
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    LEViATHAN polycounter lvl 11
    gb 2 oz m8

    /e aren't the unis pretty much the same, except for maybe colour and the helmet?

    /e2 what engine are you using for fields of fire?
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  • steady
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    steady polycounter lvl 18
    Looking good to me Leviathan, I am a junky when it comes to shots like these.
    Don't spend too much time worrying about it, you can always go back and fix it later if need be.
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  • Harry
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    Harry polycounter lvl 13
    LEViATHAN wrote: »
    gb 2 oz m8

    /e aren't the unis pretty much the same, except for maybe colour and the helmet?

    /e2 what engine are you using for fields of fire?

    I dont know, its not my project. Im pretty sure JonJon is writing his own thing

    The uniform is very similar. Way sicker hats though.
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  • butt_sahib
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    butt_sahib polycounter lvl 11
    Excellent work. Love the silhouette.Would maybe widen his shoulders some
    But would like to see something finished from you for a change though! :)
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