Warrior character

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  Lord McMutton polycounter lvl 17

  Jun 2008

  More
  
  

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  Lord McMutton polycounter lvl 17

  Jun 2008

  More belts.
  

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  NanaD

  Jun 2008

  It definitely is looking better than your previous version. I would suggest not having his belt drape over his crotch the way it is now, its creating a tangent with where his legs start and to me is making it hard to distinguish how long his torso is compared to his legs. Also I would add more to that belt, right now its just sticking out from under his waist-wrap, I think it would look better if it continued up his back or something. I would try to make it look like it serves a purpose, unless he's just trying to be stylish.
  
  I'm not a character person though, so I'm sorry I can't give you a better critique.

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  Lord McMutton polycounter lvl 17

  Jun 2008

  Thanks for the critique, Nana. Nice to have someone reply.
  I'm addicted to belts, so I added another. I just need to figure out what to put on it. I also added some accessories.
  
  

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  Wilex polycounter lvl 16

  Jun 2008

  What you have so far looks like an improvement but it’s hard to tell what you’re trying to achieve. Do you have concept art or reference for the piece? It’s hard to say anything without knowing what you’re going for. I think you should adjust the smoothing groups the random switching between hard and soft surfaces on your model is awkward. Other than that I don’t see anything but the obvious, Where's the head?

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  Lord McMutton polycounter lvl 17

  Jun 2008

  I don't really have a solid concept, I'm just going off an idea in my head. Concering the smoothing, Truespace, the program I use to model, doesn't support smoothing groups. I apply those when I import the model into Gmax. Haven't modelled the head yet.

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  Lord McMutton polycounter lvl 17

  Jun 2008

  Here's the head so far. It just needs eyes, ears, and hair.
  
  Ignore the rendering errors on the collar.
  

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  Lord McMutton polycounter lvl 17

  Jun 2008

  I added some hair planes, and made the battle axe.
  
  

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  Lord McMutton polycounter lvl 17

  Jun 2008

  Now, with some minor adjustments, I'm finished with the modelling. Unless anybody has anything to say? Anyone?
  

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