alien bust

davidfillups · Jun 2008

W.I.P. based on a concept by paul richards

let me know what you think

Thanks

Ged · Jun 2008

good start, more teeth and the hat and the monacle would be kewl!

are you gonna do the suit and everything?

Neo_God · Jun 2008

I dig it.

It reminds me of the styles aliens had in the MiB cartoon series.

Archanex · Jun 2008

pretty cool man. I like the idea of a monocle, but you'd have to modify his face to be more like your drawing to make it work. As it is, your model has no cheekbones

davidfillups · Jun 2008

thanks for the comments guys. yea i was planning on doing the suit and everything

davidfillups · Jun 2008

added the suit and hat. let me know what you think

Thanks

Firecracker197 · Jun 2008

Your overall shape of the head looks a little bit more rounded than the concept, I would try and make the head flow better into the hat to create a better shape, and get the same kind feel the concept gives. Also maybe push the head back a little to give him more of that gangster attitude, not that important now, but it might help that concept come through more again.

killingpeople · Jun 2008

The hat isn't the same shape, stay true!

davidfillups · Jun 2008

thanks for the comments guys heres a few more updates

davidfillups · Jun 2008

thanks so much for the feedback guys heres a few updates

feedback is still more than welcome
Thanks

Neox · Jun 2008

haha great

give the cloth more edges right now it feels kinda floating, very soft and roundish, try to capture the sharp edges from the concept

Cybroxide · Jun 2008

Wow this coming out awesome dave! I agree with neox the lapels are feeling a bit soft.

SHEPEIRO · Jun 2008

i feel a hanky in a jaket poket is needed

flaagan · Jun 2008

He doesn't look quite as weathered and wrinkly as he does in the concept.

davidfillups · Jun 2008

hey guys thanks for all of the comment
here is a small update.
im planning on adding a handkerchief in the pocket and then i will be doing a low and texturing.

let me know what you think
thanks

Marisa · Jun 2008

Love what you've done. I like how you've sharpened the suit a bit more. Great Job. I'm glad your going to dive into texturing.

JO420 · Jun 2008

Really nice,loving the monocle

stimpack · Jun 2008

somethings not quite right in the cheekbone/eye sockety area. might wanna take a closer look, or even stray from the concept and make it a bit more functunal. looks creat tho.

Blue · Jun 2008

stimpack wrote: »

somethings not quite right in the cheekbone/eye sockety area. might wanna take a closer look, or even stray from the concept and make it a bit more functunal. looks creat tho.

I like it. As for suggestions, I second what Stimpack says about the sides of the head feeling unfinished. In the concept there are thicker folds of skin around the lower corners of the mouth, and the line running back to the ear feels more like a thick cord than a tendon to me. Maybe go with the concept a bit in this area, and add more tension?

Irritant · Jun 2008

Very cool so far. What is holding the monacle up though?

Ironwolf · Jun 2008

Lol.. Funny model.

alien bust

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