leo (TMNT)

dejawolf

a picture i made, about 4-5 hours:

not sure if the colour choices were the best,
if you got any critique on how to improve it, its welcome,
colour and atmosphere usually isn't my strongest area when doing 2d.

Japhir

cool stuff! i like the lightning! i think the shield on his back is placed a bit too far to the back; it looks as if it is only attached to the lower back. (just becouse of the position) other than that i like it! now come up with your own concepts and stuff!

CheapAlert

Turtles are green. This is not enough green

killingpeople

nice!

Nilium

Nice stuff. Just wait 'til 3DGuy shows up, he'll sex you up real good for this work. *wink-wink*

dejawolf

heh thanks.
#japhir: was thinking more in the line of lighting,
turtles in general have weird necks, to hide their head in their shells.

The3DGuy

thats neat, about the only thing i don't like is the beak. looks like it could be 'beefed' up a little bit. Not sure that was the best word to use, but i am sure you know what i mean :P Turtle power dudes!

dejawolf

made another one:

dejawolf

and modified this one:

killingpeople

these are better than science!

Marisa

Michangelo's face looks like he ran into a wall, because his face looks completely flat. Try rounding it out a bit more, especially the top half of the face.

Fjornsvavne

Aah, Slash! He's just adorable ^^
..would've been cool if you had a palm tree or something in that pic, though. xD

Quickel

i think leo has some issues with anatomy and his stance is lacking weight. michangelo is much better and the third one is col, but watch out for his left arm. it doesn't read well.

i love the homage you're paying to the turtles here!

dejawolf

eh? well of course he's got issues with anatomy. he's a friggin ninja turtle! :P

i don't know what you mean about lack of weight?
as for slash' arm, how do i make it read better?