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New Girl
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Gonna post this here before i start uving incase theres something major i missed with this model, let me know.
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Minor nitpick on the edgeflow, but other than that, looks good.
However your edge loops are also pretty weird here and there... like Per says the ones down the centre of her face (especially the forehead and nose) is just being silly, that'd be a bastard to animate, and tough to control, you could definitely cut those down.
The area on the outside of her eye socket (next to the eye, below the temples) is looking kinda weird, a bit too hard maybe...
I also don't like where the edge flow is going down past her mouth and onto the jawline, kinda makes it look like she has old man jowls?
Eyes are maybe a little small for my tastes, but not outside the realm of reality I guess.
Keep it up!
it seems that you smoothed the cheeks aswellwhich is a good improvement !
now go and texture that one, it will deserve it !
you are teh winner.
dont know how nobody said her jaw is untypically manly
so, her jaw is untypically manly.
also it doesnt many sense her socket is so big, her brow is so high, but the eyeball is superficially visible only in a small area. you see, once the brow curves into the hole of the socket - the eyeball is there. the socket is filled with an eyeball, there is no space. the body is built very accurately. i can make a paintover if u want.
anyways, its good lips, i dont care what this is good!
Suggestions:
- I think it's still a bit dense. You could easily remove more edge loops without affecting the general topology. I'm thinking mainly in the cheek area. And it will make you're life easier if you're going to do any rigging and facial animation.
- There are three loops close together where the eyebrows will go, get rid of the middle one. That should help to smooth out that area. Remember, you don't actually have to model where the eyebrows are going to be, the texture will take care of that. Just concentrate on the overall shape of the brow.
- The crease under the lips and above the chin seems to be overaly sharp. It just stands out because there's really no other sharp detail like that on the face. I would just pull the edges there apart a little to smooth it out.
- The sides of the mouth, right above the upper lip, seem sunken in a bit. The shading is making it look almost like she has a mustache. Puffing it out a little right in that area should fix that. Or bring in th whole lower part of her face a bit. It's hard to tell without a side view.
Can you post a straight on front and side view? And what program are you using?
watchout for the nose(nostrils) if any crits
One think, for me, front view is looking a little bit too wide.
just an idea.
One think, for me, front view is looking a little bit too wide.
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Na, I think that is due to a orthogonal view in that shot.
Can you post some shots with REAL perspective EQ?
She looks sad.... Eyes seem wrong too, much tweaking needed.
Ok fuck the fancy shaders they are just a pain in the ass.
[edit] Uved and heres a texture wip:
The point I made earlier about getting rid of the middle row of edges in the eyebrows would help here. There's a bump where the eyebrows are defined in your mesh that it interfering with where you've painted them on. Either get rid of some of the extra edges and smooth out the bump, or lower the eyebrows in the texture to lay on top of it so that we don't see that extra ridge in the model right under the eyebrows.
And smooth out the hair so we can't see the hard edges.
For the next mesh(!), I would really focus on getting the nose look right (especially the bottom of it), but for now I wouldn't bother.
send me the damn model when i get home from work.
hair is nice tho btw. oh. Per is a fag thats either never on icq or just invisible!
fixed ear up, now sleep.
EQ: great improvement man, though I do agree with Crash and per, mebbe a little desaturation would help...lazy git!
And please redo the ears, i know ears are pain but download and image and it eventually works out, also ears are attached to the head a lot more smoothly (yours kinda look like tubes coming out of the head).
And eyes.. make them more bright (especially the iris part) and maybe less blue and more yellow/beigeish.
1. The most outward part of the ear is a bit too red.
2. the hair behind the ear makes it look like it isn't properly connected to the head. Right now it looks more like some sort of 'flap' instead of a correctly attached ear.
The Sclera (white part) on the eye is too blue/cyan.
The eyebrow seems too high. She's "permanently surprised"
What is with the lack of AA on the renders?
Just give her a quick Zbrush pass (shoulder and arms arn't very detailled like the pants for instence) and texture this bitch
I remember one pic from mila in resident evil you posted, and you character seems to match it. And we can easly see that even female can have "strong" arms.
here's a close up from this ref to illustrate what I said :
anyway, it's just an idea of couse
...sorry.
Anyway EQ, do what you want
This model is awesome, you should be proud bro...I need to quit slacking and make something this good