[WIP] Forest War Camp Scene - Feedback Needed

Minase_Hoshigaki · Jul 2021

Hi guys,
I wanted to share the latest project I'm working on. It's a personal environment project. All the models were made by me. Textures were sourced form quixel and/or made in Substance Painter If you guys could give me some feedback on what I could change/improve to make it better I would really appreciate it. Thanks!

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NB. There are some props I'm currently working on for the scene that need to be added( Barrels, crates flags etc.).

sarasumm · Jul 2021

The mood and color grading of this scene is really nice. For composition, I would suggest adding one main focal point. Maybe make that bigger tent even larger or a different color to make it stand out more. Looks good so far!

Minase_Hoshigaki · Jul 2021

I see, thanks a lot! Changing the colour might distract from the colour pallete so I might work on the shape of the tent

Minase_Hoshigaki · Jul 2021

After quite a bit of consideration, I redid the lighting to have it some more direction and a lot more lit and dark areas compared to the previous versions(N.B. Lighting has not been baked yet).It also gave some interesting shadow shapes as well. I also made some props from a trim texture that I made and populated the world with them. What do you guys think? I would be grateful if you guys could give me some feedback for this update.

Minase_Hoshigaki · Jul 2021

These are the props made with the trim sheet below. I'm new to trim sheets so I opted it for a smaller use for it.

[WIP] Forest War Camp Scene - Feedback Needed

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