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Game Ready Model of my girlfriend :D

Aika2033
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Yo guys! this is my first game ready model!
Please give me any feedback you want, hope you like it!
if you want to check more this is my artstation! https://www.artstation.com/fiori_bejleri_3dart
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  • PolyHertz
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    PolyHertz polycount lvl 666
    It's not a bad piece overall, but there's a lot of small issues. The stomach area should have a crease along the center leading into the belly button, the sides of the abs are too well defined for the center to be flat like that. The hands look unusually flat and the fingers too thin. The legs and hands are quite low poly while the sweater/hair/buttons/belt/laces are all disproportionately high poly. The upper and lower jaw line is coming out too far and is affecting the way the nose is perceived. Ear details are too soft, makes them look like cauliflower ears.
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  • Aika2033
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    Aika2033 polycounter lvl 2
    Thank you very much for the feedback man!
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  • kanga
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    kanga quad damage
    Helps to have a good reference on a separate screen while you are modeling. Daz 3d is a free to use application that can assist.

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