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This is a environment I just completed. Is there anything to that which I can improve?
Thanks in advance.



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  • Ashervisalis
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    Ashervisalis godlike master sticky
    I think you're trying to tell a story with the map on the wall and the papers all over the place, but I can't figure out what the story is. The window is the strongest focal point, and it keeps reminding me the exterior is an HDRI, which probably isn't a good thing. I also think your wood grain is flowing the wrong way on your cabinet in some areas.
  • nrahman
    Thanks for pointing out man!
    Can you suggest me how can I improve the outside of the window and I will look into the cabinet nonetheless.
    Thanks again.
  • Ashervisalis
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    No problem :)

    It's kind of weird seeing those electrical towers so close to this house, and the wires look like they would be going over the house. I think it would look more realistic if the exterior was just blue sky with a simple ground. I would also suggest changing the colour of the window sill to maybe a brown, so the window doesn't draw all the attention of the viewer.
  • nrahman
    Thanks a lot!
    Got the general idea.
    Thanks again man.
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