[WIP] Romanian Fighter - PM md. 90

Necrodark · Apr 2020

hey there, im in the process of finalizing this weapon ive been working on for a class project.
I would really appreciate some general feedback before finishing up and doing the final renders.
Thanks!

teodar23 · Apr 2020

Looks realy good!
The metal is a bit too shiny but maybe thats due to the hdri.

Vertexpolyfort · Apr 2020

i really like the presentation of the gun and the modeling overall

Necrodark · Apr 2020

@teodar23 Thanks man, ill play around with the roughness values and see what i can do.

lluc21 · Apr 2020

It is looking really solid at the moment. If anything I'd say that the magazine is too bright, I'd try to darken it a bit, as right now it is catching a lot of attention and distracts from the rest of the piece.

Necrodark · May 2020

@DarthMaul Thanks for the feedback man, The wood already has quite a bit of normal detail but i can try tweaking the values. Also the wrap is meant to be duct tape but maybe its not coming across well enough.

Zi0 · May 2020

The edge wear is very uniform, it follows the outlines which looks quite weird. Overall nice work tho

KAE · May 2020

nice work!

m00k · May 2020

Nice work friend! It's a pretty original take on such an iconic weapon.

As for feedback, I think the wood might be a little too saturated or too high in value. I'd kick that back just a tad.

Very cool !

Necrodark · May 2020

@m00k thanks dude! youre definitely right on the saturation i've already been toucing it up, ill post final soon.

Necrodark · May 2020

UPDATE

Thank you all for the great feedback, it really helped me polish up the project and get it to a place i am happy with.
Im posting the final renders on Artstation, so head over there if you want to check it out!
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/JlXaPn

Image: https://cdna.artstation.com/p/assets/images/images/026/334/950/large/owyn-springer-side-b.jpg?1588511892

m00k · May 2020

Well done brother! You definitely improved it! Congratz on finishing!

Necrodark · May 2020

m00k Thanks matey! your feedback on the wood was on point👌

Frigus · May 2020

Super cool rendering and texturing.

m00k · May 2020

Just read ur lvl80 article. Gratz on getting one!

[WIP] Romanian Fighter - PM md. 90

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