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This is a Sci-fi lab game environment made in Unreal 4. 
It was Inspired by Bioshock and Prey. 
The server design is based on Coleman Mayhall's work but I still made it myself
I'd love some critique on how I can get to the level of landing job or internship.



Heres a video of a cutscene and a walkthrough of the scene
https://youtu.be/omcX_SL6FyA

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  • TheGabmeister
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    Hmmm...... There's some room for improvement on the lighting. Are you using only Dynamic Lights? There seems to be an absence of bounced lighting and occlusion in some sections. Also, the part below has some sort of invisible light source. You might want to add an emissive light bulb over there to make it more believable.


  • Kainkun
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    @TheGabmeister
    Thanks, that light is static so I'm not sure what's going on. Any idea what else can be wrong? Some of the lights are dynamic because the shadows look better for dynamic lights. Like the one on the floor pointing at the fence. Yeah I could use some light models, I overlooked that
  • TheGabmeister
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    Try playing around with Stationary Lights as well. They give nice shadows while still having baked indirect lighting.

    In your scene below for example, there's a sharp contrast between the floor and the wall, which I believe is caused by a lack of bounced lighting.


    Aside from the one I pointed out earlier, how many static and stationary lights do you have in your scene?
  • fullpinkdog
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    I might be wrong, but seems likely that you did not uncheck sRGB in _OcclusionRoughnessMetallic map(or what maps did you use?), it may be the couse of problem that your materials looks a bit too shiny and a bit "wet" :)

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    @TheGabmeister
    Thanks, hows this? I think that helped brighten up the scene but now there's a seam in the ceiling do you know what's up with that? It is a seamless texture.
    oh and there was 3 stationary lights, 5 moving lights and 3 static lights

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    @fullpinkdog
    I'm pretty sure I've unchecked sRGB for all of the OcclusionRoughnessMetallic maps. What made you ask that? Is there a specific model that looks wrong?
    here's one of my 
    OcclusionRoughnessMetallic maps (The server)


  • TheGabmeister
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    Kainkun said:
    @TheGabmeister
    Thanks, hows this? I think that helped brighten up the scene but now there's a seam in the ceiling do you know what's up with that? It is a seamless texture.
    oh and there was 3 stationary lights, 5 moving lights and 3 static lights
    Ok, thanks for the information. For the seam, that's probably caused by having two flat meshes side-by-side. That's a very common issue especially in interior scenes when you bake lights. You can try the following:
    1. Increase lightmap resolution
    2. Adjust Lightmass settings. I forgot which parameter you should change to mitigate this issue.
    3. Replace the ceiling with a single mesh with 2 UV sets: 1 for the texture, and 1 for the lightmap.

    Also, you might want to add a baseboard covering the lowest part of the wall.
  • fullpinkdog
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    @Kainkun
    yeah, this spots looks a bit wierd to me. But again, i might be wrong
    Also, you can fix the seams between modular pieces by enter this values in the world settings:

    if it doesn't work for you - try to make lightmaps by yourself with good amont pixels between uv pieces, also between uv pieces and board of uv space. Also you can set static lighting level scale to ~0.2-0.4, but this greatly increase bake time and usually it's enough to set up your values like on the screenshot :) and yeah, increase lightmap resolution if it all does not work
  • Kainkun
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    @TheGabmeister Thanks, I don't know much about lightmass so ill look into that
  • Kainkun
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    @fullpinkdog Yeah that concrete texture used to be correct but I've been messing with substance and I messed it up without realizing.
    I tried those settings but I dont notice any change, the seams are definitely still there. I assume the commas are the same as periods? 1.0   4.0   0.75
  • fullpinkdog
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    @Kainkun after changing those values, you need to rebake lightmaps and make sure you bake in production quality
  • TheGabmeister
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    Kainkun said:


     
    Anyway, just wanted to add this comment. I think you can improve the floor material by blending it with some grunges and adding more decals. This can produce a more cohesive scene since most of the objects you created are pretty grungy,
  • Kainkun
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    Thanks guys, I appreciate the help :smile:

  • jStins
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    The scale of the wear, damage and dirt texture is too large across many of your props, which hurts the overall sense of scale for the space. Damage, dirt and wear and tear have a scale hierarchy of large, medium and small shapes similarly to how there is a hierarchy of  large, medium and small forms in an environment. Try to avoid the temptation to overdo these details in an attempt to make the environment feel detailed. Another consideration is the overall visual impact of any wear or damages detail. There are instances where subtly applying these details in the roughness map may be more effective than applying the detail uniformly across all your texture maps. 


  • Kainkun
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    @jStins Thanks :) Yeah I need to learn more about weathering. I appreciate the feedback
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