Need feedback / critic - Dota 2 fanart

AdrienMTZ · Mar 2019

Greetings !
I recently started doing a dota 2 fanart of my fav character (don't come at me he's the best.)
And I would definitely like some feedback on how to make this stronger.
I'm not that good at composition, so that would be the main thing i'm asking help for, but any critic is welcome !
Thanks

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/nk/aki5zkmdtrsx.jpg

AdrienMTZ · Mar 2019

Edit : I was thinking of adding an explosion on the background, since I early decided that I might be cool to have the one on the char to push the button on the remote

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/5u/7xqqf7pt77n7.jpg

bystry · Mar 2019

Hi, nice so far:) Its promising. I would suggest you to focus on one or two main element in composition and emphasize them.

AdrienMTZ · Mar 2019

Thank you, I went for something totally different for the background, update :

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/lj/mcs41i52hci8.jpg

AdrienMTZ · Nov 2019

Been a while since lurking on the polycount forums, forgot to post the final result !

Need feedback / critic - Dota 2 fanart

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