mmmm. Ok I am still not there so I can´t really say much , but I would not recommend anyone to show a WIP project in the portfolio. There should only be your best finished projects. And about which projects to pull out, I would go with the zombie and the The Mage's Tale Props. The rest look fine.
As it is a character art portfolio, I would ditch every environment piece.
All the WIP stuffs should go too for obvious reasons.
When it comes to the characters, I can see in your resume that you've been making characters professionally since 2013 and I think it should actually show in your portfolio with only characters that have the quality expected from someone with 5 years experience in character art. So I would keep Gunslinger, Costume for Republique Remastered and Leather Daddy Reinhardt.
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