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Cyberpunk Sci-Fi Alleyway

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Worked on this for a couple weeks.. Every aspect by me..
Done with Maya, Quixel Mixer/Substance Painter/Photoshop & V-Ray

Clay Render:


I'm open to feedback and critique and would be very happy about any comments from the community!
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  • FreneticPonies
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    FreneticPonies polycounter lvl 3
    Uhm, nice job
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  • Fabi_G
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    Hey STFvfx, that's a nice scene :) Here is what I think can be improved:

    - Most potential is in the lighting. Adding some light-sources and have them react with the scene can give more depth and help readability.
    - Most of the robots seem to have the same very shiny material. You could assign different materials to get more variations there (also in the way they react to light).
    - Elements orthogonal to the alley can assist the perspective and add some detail to the big concrete shapes. 
    - Check scaling: Bottle-crates in the middle look relatively big, sign could be bigger (it's supposed to advertise I think).
    - break up strict alignment of elements (chairs, water-bottles).

    here is a paint-over to show what I mean

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  • Gam3B0y
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    Gam3B0y polycounter lvl 3
    looks soo awesome!! 
    maybe we should put my character in your envoirment (when I'll finish her) ))
    (i'm also doying Cyberpunk-esque character)
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  • STFvfx
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    Fabi_G said:
    Hey STFvfx, that's a nice scene :) Here is what I think can be improved:

    - Most potential is in the lighting. Adding some light-sources and have them react with the scene can give more depth and help readability.
    - Most of the robots seem to have the same very shiny material. You could assign different materials to get more variations there (also in the way they react to light).
    - Elements orthogonal to the alley can assist the perspective and add some detail to the big concrete shapes. 
    - Check scaling: Bottle-crates in the middle look relatively big, sign could be bigger (it's supposed to advertise I think).
    - break up strict alignment of elements (chairs, water-bottles).

    here is a paint-over to show what I mean

    Thank you for the criticism. Ill definitly keep that in mind for the next time.
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    Fabi_G said:
    Hey STFvfx, that's a nice scene :) Here is what I think can be improved:

    - Most potential is in the lighting. Adding some light-sources and have them react with the scene can give more depth and help readability.
    - Most of the robots seem to have the same very shiny material. You could assign different materials to get more variations there (also in the way they react to light).
    - Elements orthogonal to the alley can assist the perspective and add some detail to the big concrete shapes. 
    - Check scaling: Bottle-crates in the middle look relatively big, sign could be bigger (it's supposed to advertise I think).
    - break up strict alignment of elements (chairs, water-bottles).

    here is a paint-over to show what I mean

    Thank you for the criticism. Ill definitly keep that in mind for the next time.
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