Cyberpunk Sci-Fi Alleyway

STFvfx

Worked on this for a couple weeks.. Every aspect by me..
Done with Maya, Quixel Mixer/Substance Painter/Photoshop & V-Ray

Clay Render:


I'm open to feedback and critique and would be very happy about any comments from the community!

FreneticPonies

Uhm, nice job

Fabi_G

Hey STFvfx, that's a nice scene Here is what I think can be improved:

- Most potential is in the lighting. Adding some light-sources and have them react with the scene can give more depth and help readability.
- Most of the robots seem to have the same very shiny material. You could assign different materials to get more variations there (also in the way they react to light).
- Elements orthogonal to the alley can assist the perspective and add some detail to the big concrete shapes. 
- Check scaling: Bottle-crates in the middle look relatively big, sign could be bigger (it's supposed to advertise I think).
- break up strict alignment of elements (chairs, water-bottles).

here is a paint-over to show what I mean

Gam3B0y

looks soo awesome!! 
maybe we should put my character in your envoirment (when I'll finish her) ))
(i'm also doying Cyberpunk-esque character)

STFvfx

Fabi_G said:

Hey STFvfx, that's a nice scene Here is what I think can be improved:

- Most potential is in the lighting. Adding some light-sources and have them react with the scene can give more depth and help readability.
- Most of the robots seem to have the same very shiny material. You could assign different materials to get more variations there (also in the way they react to light).
- Elements orthogonal to the alley can assist the perspective and add some detail to the big concrete shapes. 
- Check scaling: Bottle-crates in the middle look relatively big, sign could be bigger (it's supposed to advertise I think).
- break up strict alignment of elements (chairs, water-bottles).

here is a paint-over to show what I mean

Thank you for the criticism. Ill definitly keep that in mind for the next time.

STFvfx

Fabi_G said:

Hey STFvfx, that's a nice scene Here is what I think can be improved:

- Most potential is in the lighting. Adding some light-sources and have them react with the scene can give more depth and help readability.
- Most of the robots seem to have the same very shiny material. You could assign different materials to get more variations there (also in the way they react to light).
- Elements orthogonal to the alley can assist the perspective and add some detail to the big concrete shapes. 
- Check scaling: Bottle-crates in the middle look relatively big, sign could be bigger (it's supposed to advertise I think).
- break up strict alignment of elements (chairs, water-bottles).

here is a paint-over to show what I mean

Thank you for the criticism. Ill definitly keep that in mind for the next time.