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Female Dark Eldar(elf) Hellion (kinda stylized) (40K)

Gam3B0y
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Hey guys ) 
I started new character, Dark Eldar Hellion. 
I just stared her, I mean I created body/Face. 
now I'm starting to make her Gear and also Hoverboard.

I'll be very happy to hear any CC, you'll give ) 


e her progress,  


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  • Gam3B0y
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    Gam3B0y polycounter lvl 3
    Blocked in some details. I kinda want to give her 80's style )
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  • Blouko
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    Blouko polycounter lvl 7
    Hello there,

    There seems to be something strange about the anatomy of the character. There is a line surrounding the abdominal area, which I don't think is normally there.

    Also, her breast don't look like they have any weight too them. Think of it as a bag on the chest, they should feel like they're being pulled down and out.

    The arms also look like they don't have enough skin and weight, unless your elf is a body builder. Just like the breast, there is weight on the flaccid muscle. One last thing, the belly button looks off. Try looking at reference, it will help a bunch.
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  • Gam3B0y
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    Gam3B0y polycounter lvl 3
    Blouko said:
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    Hey ) thanks for cc/suggestions!  I'll keep them in mind ) 


    as muscles go, yeah she is supposed to be muscled beyond average. But of course it needs more work. 
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  • Gam3B0y
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    Gam3B0y polycounter lvl 3
    some progress in costume
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