1950s's Detective

AndresZambrano · May 2018

Hello everyone, I would like to share some of my new work with this community. This a real time character project rendered in Marmoset Toolbag 3. Feedback is appreciated and if you would like to see more pictures with different lighting setups and a turntable video please visit my Artstation page at: https://www.artstation.com/andres_zambrano

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PyrZern · May 2018

Pretty high quality, I like it. Seems pretty clean as well.

Small critiques would be;

1. trigger/finger discipline.

2. He's a little too plain/generic.

JinKazamaDor · May 2018

Hi, really nice stuff.

Seems to fit together nicely however I do agree with the generic look, for me I think it is the eyes because he does have moles and nice subtle scars but something still seems generic, is there a way to get more personality into the eyes? Off the top of my head maybe some asymmetry with a slight squint in one eye?

You know your character better than I do obviously, so maybe that won't work or suit the theme you are going for.

Maybe my suggestion will spark another idea for you though

Brian "Panda" Choi · May 2018

The pores seems too small, or is that just me?

AndresZambrano · May 2018

Thank you! yeah he is a character for a multiplayer game project so he's like an avatar and so yeah he is pretty generic honestly. I'll try add more grit to my next characters regardless.

AndresZambrano · May 2018

PyrZern said:

Pretty high quality, I like it. Seems pretty clean as well.

Small critiques would be;

1. trigger/finger discipline.

2. He's a little too plain/generic.

Yeah I should have put his finger away from trigger haha. Good observation.

AndresZambrano · May 2018

Brian "Panda" Choi said:

The pores seems too small, or is that just me?

I used the texture xyz pores for the male 30s I believe for the main pores of the face. They do seem a bit small though, especially on the cheeks.

1950s's Detective

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