1950s's Detective

AndresZambrano

Hello everyone, I would like to share some of my new work with this community. This a real time character project rendered in Marmoset Toolbag 3. Feedback is appreciated and if you would like to see more pictures with different lighting setups and a turntable video please visit my Artstation page at: https://www.artstation.com/andres_zambrano

PyrZern

Pretty high quality, I like it. Seems pretty clean as well.

Small critiques would be; 

1. trigger/finger discipline.

2. He's a little too plain/generic.

JinKazamaDor

Hi, really nice stuff.

Seems to fit together nicely however I do agree with the generic look, for me I think it is the eyes because he does have moles and nice subtle scars but something still seems generic, is there a way to get more personality into the eyes? Off the top of my head maybe some asymmetry with a slight squint in one eye?

You know your character better than I do obviously, so maybe that won't work or suit the theme you are going for.

Maybe my suggestion will spark another idea for you though

Brian "Panda" Choi

The pores seems too small, or is that just me?

AndresZambrano

Thank you! yeah he is a character for a multiplayer game project so he's like an avatar and so yeah he is pretty generic honestly. I'll try add more grit to my next characters regardless.

AndresZambrano

PyrZern said:

Pretty high quality, I like it. Seems pretty clean as well.

Small critiques would be; 

1. trigger/finger discipline.

2. He's a little too plain/generic.

Yeah I should have put his finger away from trigger haha. Good observation.

AndresZambrano

Brian "Panda" Choi said:

The pores seems too small, or is that just me?

I used the texture xyz pores for the male 30s I believe for the main pores of the face. They do seem a bit small though, especially on the cheeks.