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First time uploading... Ogre Character

Kgizzi
Kgizzi
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Hey guys. This is pretty much the first time I'm uploading a more or less finished project to the internet. I sculpted it myself but the design is loosely based on a character from a work by Weta artist Tom Newbury, whose tutorials I recommend. The sculpt was done in Zbrush, textured in Mari and it is rendered with Arnold in Maya. Hair done in Xgen. Any feedback and advice would be appreciated, thanks.

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  • Maxilator
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    Looks pretty good, I think you can go a bit further in making the skin more gnarly. Looks a bit too smooth and well kept for an ogre if you ask me.
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  • GreyJke
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    Try different lighting as well! For me it is the weakest part of this project.
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    Maxilator said:
    Looks pretty good, I think you can go a bit further in making the skin more gnarly. Looks a bit too smooth and well kept for an ogre if you ask me.
    Thanks man yea I definitely need to consider the secondary forms more before I finalize what the displacements it looks like. I thought I had more warts and divots in there, but once I put the tertiary form displacement maps over it they all seemed to get lost. This was my first time using UV maps and UDIMs so I definitely need to consider that more next time around.
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    GreyJke said:
    Try different lighting as well! For me it is the weakest part of this project.
    Yea man I tried, I have to tinker with it more. I do most of my sculpting at my laptop but can't really do the lookdev/rendering as well without my more powerful PC at home :'( The eye heights are asymmetrical so I was getting weirder looking results when I would have a defined angle of lighting with a rim light on the back. I know that's how models need to be lit though so I'm gonna have to figure that problem out going into the future =/ I think the angle of view and camera in general is a bit boring. I think I just need to spend more time figuring out the cameras in Arnold. I don't even have any depth of field in the shots yet. It works for me in keyshot but not Arnold yet for some reason. But yes I definitely need to try to figure out how to use more cinematic lighting and angles without making the model look like crap lol. Thanks.
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  • Kgizzi
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    Another question I had for you more adept Maya users than I... what is the best Angle of View to use in Maya? I used the default 53 or whatever the Maya camera has and it looked very awkward and warped for me. I sculpt with it set to 28 in Zbrush. Does anyone have any recommendations?
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