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Eliza_Mosk
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Nov 2017
Did this digital painting to put up on my online portfolio, any feedback/constructive criticism would be great thanks
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EricElwell
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Nov 2017
The character looks like it is falling over. Check the relationship between the knees, feet, & hip tilt. You could also drop a plum line from the neck to the floor to see where your weight needs to be distributed.
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JordanN
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Nov 2017
I think some of your lines could be straighter with closer attention to perspective.
I did a quick mockup of the gas tank (?) to show if it's leaning forwards or backwards.
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I did a quick mockup of the gas tank (?) to show if it's leaning forwards or backwards.