WIP - WWII Motorcycle

JonathanChoi · Dec 2016

Hey everyone. I haven't been on Polycount in a long time. For the final for one of my senior classes I am making an old motorcycle (i believe its a BMW r75) and I thought I'd post it here for feedback. I am still working on the texturing process, but any critique would be much appreciated.

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Daf57 · Dec 2016

No crits here, looks good, man!

CybranM · Dec 2016

Could you share some of the reference you used so that it would be easier to compare?
The model looks good but I think you could try and add a bit of dirt around the mudguards and lower part of the bike. Perhaps add general grime and such to the engine area as well

JonathanChoi · Dec 2016

CybranM said:

Could you share some of the reference you used so that it would be easier to compare?
The model looks good but I think you could try and add a bit of dirt around the mudguards and lower part of the bike. Perhaps add general grime and such to the engine area as well

Heres a couple of the references I used:

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I added a bit more grime but looking at it now, its not that noticeable.. i might go in and add some more passes to the grime and dirt. thanks for the advice.

WIP - WWII Motorcycle

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