Need critique on work

kanu0009 · Sep 2016

Hello

I'm working on a character for class assignment and this the head.I want to get critique on it and to know what can be fixed.

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aceofspades230 · Sep 2016

Is there a reference by chance or requirement of the assignment?

kanu0009 · Sep 2016

There is no specific requirement for the assignment.Need to make a full character and i'm going with this one.For the face i'm picking up elements from different face references.

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Tomtegubbe · Sep 2016

There's usually more fat under the outer lower part of the eye, on the lower eyelid. Also the eyes seem to be a bit too high, they're usually located in the center of the face. There are other issues too but just look at refereces and it'll look better.

Khimarra · Sep 2016

Without seeing the references you're using for the face it's hard to say, but based on this character, the eyes also seem too big, and the brow ridge isn't big enough. This character has a fairly pronounced brow ridge. That's something that will help make a character look more intimidating, at the moment yours looks friendly in comparison. I also think your sculpt's ears are a little too big, and they're sticking out too far, especially at the bottom.

It's looking good so far, though! Keep going!

kanu0009 · Sep 2016

@Tomtegubbe and @Khimarra Thank you guys.Worked on the suggestion and made ears smaller and moved them inwards and make eyes go back more so that brow ridge comes out more.This is if have got so far.Working on the pant and the shoe.

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kanu0009 · Oct 2016

Rework on the head

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NoRank · Oct 2016

Hmm, maybe it's just me but I really think that you could just work more on his lips, feels a little bit unnatural to me and it's not really going along with his nose.

alenarobo · Oct 2016

I really like the proportions of his face! He's coming along. I would say his mouth looks too flat along his face. I struggle soooo much with lips/mouths. Sometimes looking at a planer head model helps.

kanu0009 · Oct 2016

@NoRank @alenarobo - Thank you so much for your feedback and yes i'm still working on the lips as you can see its still flat.

Aveon · Oct 2016

Just reference your reference more I'd say, the shapes of his face are actually very simple, but look complex because of the extreme creases he's got from scars, stress and expression. An example is his nose; your indentation above the Ala of the nose is too large and starts too high, making the shape of your dorsum nasi more of a diamond, where his is more triangular.

kanu0009 · Oct 2016

Update - Worked on the lips and this is what i got so far for my character.

Need critique on work

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