Semi realistic girl

Maxilator · Sep 2016

Decided to make a thread for this since I've worked on it for a while and the thread I posted originally in was intended for small testing and practice, first started out as a doodle but I decided to keep going with it. Previous updates can be seen here (http://polycount.com/discussion/177422/maxilators-random-stuff-thread#latest )

Kept working on the hair a little bit and played around with piercings, kind of fit her I think but I've not decided yet.

Cheers!

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seimax · Sep 2016

cool work man !

Maxilator · Sep 2016

Changed around the piercings a bit and added a few for the ears, also added a few more stray strands in the hair and such. I made a pair of glasses but after considering I didn't really feel them, I'd love some feedback, I'm pretty much just going of my own sense of style and taste so some input might open my eyes to something I wouldn't think of.

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Maxilator · Sep 2016

@seimax Thanks!

Gave her color and eyelashes, some other minor adjustments as well.

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I kind of like this desaturated style I used before, but I'd like to know what you think. (Not that this is the final render I think)

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/2t/brg41yvrcgcr.png

I don't know what how much more I could do on her but be sure to let me know if you find anything that I should adjust!

Maxilator · Sep 2016

More updaterino, thought she might look good with a tattoo, so I made a fast one to see how it might look, I kind of like it, though this one was pretty fast and messy because I more wanted to see what darkening the throat area would look like. I'll probably make it flow a bit more down over the collarbones though looking at it now depending on whether or not you think I should keep it.
I don't know how much more I'll do today since it's my birthday but I'd still like to hear your comments, no need to be shy!

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Maxilator · Sep 2016

Come on guys, there has to be something that can be improved, I feel like I'm asking for critique from a wall here.

Maxilator · Sep 2016

Hey again, decided to keep fiddling with the tattoo, what do you think, should I keep it, and if so should I change it in any way?

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lotet · Sep 2016

Personally I like the glasses, they added a lot of personality. I would also increase the size of the piercings some, now they read a bit noisy feel way to thin I think.

as for anatomy, most of the features are looking a bit soft and undefined. especially the nose and mouth. another example would be the lower eyelid fold, you could really dig in there with damien standard. I also think the neck and clavicles could be way more defined. you can look at this and this for reference.

hope that help!

Maxilator · Sep 2016

@Lotet Thanks a bunch! Good calls, all of them, especially the point about her face feeling too soft, not pushing the edges and planes enough is something I've struggled with quite a bit before so catching me on that is very helpful!

I still can't really get into the glasses myself, I think they look a bit more contemporary than I'd like, but I would say such a thing comes down a lot to taste.

Here is how she looks now that I worked a bit on her based on what you said about the features and piercings, I also raised the jaw a tad because I thought the face was a bit longer than I liked:

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/fb/7h7p2w5h1h2j.png

And here is a render with the glasses on for the heck of it:

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I'm pretty happy with what that did to the face, do you think I should push it more like that?

Cheers!

Maxilator · Sep 2016

Decided to add more of the torso, arms and clothing to her, might start wrapping this up soon if you don't have anything I should change.

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Maxilator · Sep 2016

Wrapped her up, here is the result!

https://www.artstation.com/artwork/qv4en

Semi realistic girl

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