Medabots shot 03

dotsonkt · Sep 2016

Character running to camera and getting startled and coming to a stop as her enemies land in front of her

EVernier · Sep 2016

There's a lot of pops in there. You should smooth them out. Is her right arm still because it's damaged? It should feel a bit limp, even if she's a robot, rather then just straight like that. If you just look at the pose at the end out of context, you can't really tell her emotion or intent. Think about the verb behind the pose and make sure that it's crystal clear to the viewer.

dotsonkt · Sep 2016

Thank you. I've been having trouble getting the pops out to be honest, and yes her arm is still damaged.

dotsonkt · Sep 2016

Updated clip with some changes. #EVernier

slipsius · Sep 2016

Wrong link. But also, can you upload your file to www.syncsketch.com and post the link here? It will be easier to give you a proper critique.

dotsonkt · Sep 2016

Updated clip with some changes.
Thank's slipsius. http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/61203d32c3144f0c832948cddbdc46a9#104851

EVernier · Sep 2016

Left some notes. The run is still very wobbly, try to keep the head in more or less a straight line. When she jumps the CoG, at the highest point, stays at the exactly the same spot for 3-4 frames, it should be moving up/down just a bit to create that hang time. Get an arc going on in her left leg when she slides and stops.

Also a few places where she's off balance.

Medabots shot 03

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