Mimic-FAN ART

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  killnpc polycounter

  Jun 2016

  Cool slime, nice!

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  Kel-Shaded polycounter lvl 6

  Jun 2016

  Oooh cool, nice job dude

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  Dragonar polycounter lvl 10

  Jun 2016

  really nice job !
  

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  leandrojsj polycounter lvl 4

  Jun 2016

  Thank you guys.

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  leandrojsj polycounter lvl 4

  Jun 2016

  Guys, see marmoset viewer: http://www.leandrojsj.com.br/projects/mimic/mimic.html
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  tda polycounter lvl 16

  Jun 2016

  Love this dude, suuuper faithful to the concept design. Great recreation.
  
  Couple of points though. The material defenition is pretty loose, the metal on the chest reads the same as the wood, the teeth, the tongue, the floor. Looking at your gloss it seems like it's just the AO which is why. It's making it all feel plastic wrapped, the floor suffers really badly from this. The chest in general also seems kinda rushed compared to the mouth area which looks great. Not a problem in your presentation shots because you can't see it, but when you let people go back there with the marmo viewer it lets the whole piece down i feel. Same with the floor, it's not up to the standard of the mouth.
  
  The mouth is solid though, even without a dedicated gloss map it already looks great. This piece has great potential man, you should push it further!
  

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  leandrojsj polycounter lvl 4

  Jun 2016

  tda said:

  Love this dude, suuuper faithful to the concept design. Great recreation.
  
  Couple of points though. The material defenition is pretty loose, the metal on the chest reads the same as the wood, the teeth, the tongue, the floor. Looking at your gloss it seems like it's just the AO which is why. It's making it all feel plastic wrapped, the floor suffers really badly from this. The chest in general also seems kinda rushed compared to the mouth area which looks great. Not a problem in your presentation shots because you can't see it, but when you let people go back there with the marmo viewer it lets the whole piece down i feel. Same with the floor, it's not up to the standard of the mouth.
  
  The mouth is solid though, even without a dedicated gloss map it already looks great. This piece has great potential man, you should push it further!
  

  Thank you mother, the next project will be improving further. I have great respect for the concepts and my goal is to elese shine.
  

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  leandrojsj polycounter lvl 4

  Jun 2016

  dustinbrown said:

  Looks nice. I agree with the comment regarding material definition. I also think you could do a lot more geometry optimization on the organic bits. It's currently very high poly, especially for this art style.

  Thanks DUSTINBROWN, I will look at this.
  

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  Dragonar polycounter lvl 10

  Jun 2016

  I completely agree with @dustinbrown ! but overall nice job
  

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  leandrojsj polycounter lvl 4

  Jun 2016

  Dragonar said:

  I completely agree with @dustinbrown ! but overall nice job
  

  Thanks @draconar. Each work will seek to improve more.
  

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