Need Critiques and help with Head Sculpt

sugunwar · May 2016

Hello, friends.

I try to find proper shapes, could you help me? Its so important make visual same head

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/fs/thr9r58afqgi.jpg

owlfrog · May 2016

I think the bridge of the nose is a bit too thin, the shadows in the image make it seem very thin but it's actually a bit wider I believe. Perhaps make the wrinkles less prominent in the eyebrow/top of the nose area.

I think the difficult part is getting the eyes to look a bit more relaxed/calm. The angle of the wrinkles at the sides of the eye almost make it look like he's squinting, where in the picture, he's a bit more relaxed I think.

Those are my suggestions, hope they help out!

Mr.Moose · May 2016

Using artistic work as a reference is a huge no-no in realism. Use photographs where possible. Need to go down to a lower subdiv and work out the forms, its very lumpy feeling right now

sugunwar · May 2016

Hey guys, little update here
is it right way?

Mr.Moose said:

Using artistic work as a reference is a huge no-no in realism. Use photographs where possible. Need to go down to a lower subdiv and work out the forms, its very lumpy feeling right now

with pleasure, but I have only this sketch

owlfrog said:

I think the bridge of the nose is a bit too thin, the shadows in the image make it seem very thin but it's actually a bit wider I believe. Perhaps make the wrinkles less prominent in the eyebrow/top of the nose area.

I think the difficult part is getting the eyes to look a bit more relaxed/calm. The angle of the wrinkles at the sides of the eye almost make it look like he's squinting, where in the picture, he's a bit more relaxed I think.

Those are my suggestions, hope they help out!

yep you right

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/68/zcn24wbhold9.jpg

sugunwar · May 2016

one more

sugunwar · May 2016

hey here is little update

still need your critiques

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/4q/ajvyglb9z24z.jpg

GenesisAsis · May 2016

Good sculpt. To push it further:
1. Check how the ear passes further than the head
2. The corner of the mouth is at an angle rather than a curve
3. The eyes are more squinting in the reference
4. The frontal process of zygomatic bone protrudes then goes back in at the top
5. The jaw is at a sharper angle

I hope that helps!

Sirdelita · May 2016

Looking good! Don't be afraid to have some sharper angles at times.

sugunwar · May 2016

Hey, guys here is update. I try again.

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/gl/4qonily9mm28.jpg

and with pespective

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/sn/tjxv34huoszb.jpg

hope this version will better

allengingrich · May 2016

That's slightly better, but your model is "bumpy". This means you went too high resolution before you nailed the major forms. Work from a low resolution until you just can't squeeze anymore detail, then divide.

Good luck!

sugunwar · May 2016

Hey here is update

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/au/ogs3usxt4pa2.jpg

was\became

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/zq/c49gccmipgqk.jpg

PyrZern · May 2016

Personally, I would retopologize this, into a proper basemesh with nice topology, then slowly go higher subdiv, and project the sculpt back on. You will benefit A LOT with a proper topology mesh.

Something like this.

Need Critiques and help with Head Sculpt

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