STUDENT IN NEED FOR A PORTFOLIO FEED BACK.

BILDOMIKFAGINS · Nov 2015

Hi, I am a studen of MA college Amsterdam. i would love to have your opion and facts about my portfolio.
Pleas don't hold back give me all the bad review u got and a solution if necessary.

http://goo.gl/epwytn

Stinkfoot · Nov 2015

Unfortunatly, Your link doesnt load, and it doesnt look like a proper web url, maybe that's the problem?

Praglik · Nov 2015

The link is working fine for me. Had to copy and paste it in my URL bar though.
I'd say your portfolio is looking good overall, and I'd put your strongest pieces on top - and maybe inverting the order of your sketchfab preview with your About page? This way we would know you first, understand your motives, then finish reading your portfolio on a strong piece. But make sure to have some contact form at the bottom of your page so any recruiter don't have to scroll back to the top to contact you!

BILDOMIKFAGINS · Nov 2015

Contact form.

My contact form is at the bottom of my index page. you need to scroll more at the bottom to find it

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That's some heavy feedback thank you FRAGLIK.

Tobbo · Nov 2015

How about showing some breakdowns? Wireframe, flat texture sheets, etc.

Also is the 3d stuff being shown in a real-time application? I can't really tell except for the first piece being in sketchfab.

BILDOMIKFAGINS · May 2016

Thank you Tobbo, Good feedback btw ill keep that in mind. May i ask what you think about my art skills.

Zelfit · May 2016

At this moment your portfolio lacks any strong works. Start with something simple, make good highpoly, lowpoly, uv and texture it. You don't need to show all your works. Sometimes even one is fine, but it should look professional.

3dReaper · May 2016

On top of what others have said, which I agree with, you have misspelled portfolio in the header text on the top of the page. "Potfolio"

Why do you have the Latin filler text immediately below the top most image? "Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet laudantium molestias similique.
Quisquam incidunt ut laboriosam."

Below each image it states "Project Title" which shows you either just made this website or you do not care.

You are not a web designer, you want to be an artist, do you not? Choose a website that cuts most of the work out for you, like Artstation.

I would also suggest you cut all of your work, currently nothing you have is stellar. You show promise, just keep at it and improve.

Start a new prop, make it a damn good AAA prop. Use reference, use inspiration, use another artist's rendition as a goal to exceed or match.

Some good references for PBR texturing:

http://www.marmoset.co/toolbag/learn/pbr-practice

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Fb9_KgCo0noxROKN4iT8ntTbx913e-t4Wc2nMRWPzNk/edit

http://blogs.unity3d.com/2015/02/18/working-with-physically-based-shading-a-practical-approach/

Allegorithmic's Youtube playlists (paste into address bar): youtube.com/user/Allegorithmic/playlists

http://www.artisaverb.info/PBT.html

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tt30zzBQb3w

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LNwMJeWFr0U

STUDENT IN NEED FOR A PORTFOLIO FEED BACK.

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