The Hotdog Suit

natendo · Jul 2015

This was something I started for the hand painting challenge last month. But some things got in the way and I couldn't keep working on it. Now I want to finish it.

Anyway. I'd really appreciate any feedback or suggestions. Thanks.

SanderDL · Jul 2015

I think it's pretty sweet already. Maybe add some eyes/face behind the mouth from the person inside the suit.

Kaine123 · Jul 2015

I know you might still be working on it but the teeth should be asymmetrical.

Steve Schulze · Jul 2015

He's neat. You could maybe add some wrinkles on the back of the bun where the costume bends.

WarrenM · Jul 2015

I love the stitched together look of his costume. Adds a lot of character.

natendo · Jul 2015

@SanderDL: That's the plan. But probably going to do that during texturing.

@Kaine123: Hadn't thought of that. I'll try it out. See if it works.

@Steve Schulze: Thanks. I really should add some wrinkles to the costume.

@WarrenM: Thanks. I was actually kind of scared I might be going overboard with the stitching.

Crazy_pixel · Jul 2015

What a nice character

I agree with SanderDL, a face would be really interestig. Furtermore I could imagine that he use a shield for advertisement.

Example:

Keep it up! can't wait top see your progress

Steve Schulze · Jul 2015

I think you could probably afford to scale up some of the stitching too. The ones between bun and sausage aren't reading as well as they might.

Stinkfoot · Jul 2015

man that sauce totally looks like a wriggly Boner in the front view!

I'm.... i'm sorry...

allknighter · Jul 2015

Really cool concept!,
I also really like how the skinny legs and whats shown of the human inside, gives that indication of how itd be some skinny nerd inside:D

natendo · Jul 2015

So. Making progress. Slowly but surely.

Done with the low poly. Maps have been baked. Just need to clean up a few spots. Then on to texturing.

And the wireframe.

Also. I'd love any more feedback you might have. Would really appreciate it.

Dvolution · Jul 2015

Like I said back in the hand painted thread, this fella is legit. Personally, I'd kill the stitching on the condiment strip, leg openings, and along the bun/hotdog intersection of his torso. I get why it's there from a real world, sloppily constructed perspective, but it just makes it unnecessarily noisy from a design perspective.

natendo · Jul 2015

@Dvolution: You were right. Scaled back on the stitches. Definitely helped. Thanks

Textures. Still a work in progress.

Probably going to make the eyes asymmetric. And not happy with the color of his shirt. Maybe just white with a colored cuff. Also the patches need some kind of pattern.

kevinjohnxson · Jul 2015

This character is really funny!

My only crit is that I think the hot dog bun is too yellow. Currently it is the same color as the mustard.

Keep it up!

The Hotdog Suit

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