PLS Help me with dragon ...

Saly23 · Jun 2015

Hello guys, i got problem in middle of work ... so this is really not finish but i just try add some lights, sky ... for test if its work ... and think something wrong but not sure what to fix first

thanks for comments and help! :poly121:

pongstah · Jun 2015

Interesting pose. It immediately caught my eye. He's like a bat clinging to the cliff side like that.

lotet · Jun 2015

the image looks super compressed and pixely, and then scaled up again, everything has this sort of jagged edge

javi · Jun 2015

So some of the major problems I'm seeing are:
- The legs are different sizes.
- Spine is broken. Make the spine flow.

DanglinBob · Jun 2015

Im a little confused by the shadowing on the top wing too. It looks like a shadow but there's no source of something that would provide that kind of shadowing, nor any affect on any surrounding item.

Saly23 · Jun 2015

Thanks a lot to everybody, for comments! I will try to fix it!

dfacto · Jun 2015

I did a quick pass to fix just the most major things that bother me when looking at the picture:

-added firelight
-added minor rimlight from the cloudy sky
-brought spine into a smooth curve
-brought bottom shoulder upwards with trapezius muscle as it was not symmetrical with other side
-brought outer eyebrow ridge further down to make face symetrical in perspective and redid the nostril a bit just for fun :P

It's a great dynamic concept and you have a strong base! Keep working on it and pay attention to your lighting!

PLS Help me with dragon ...

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