PLS Help me with dragon ...

Saly23

Hello guys, i got problem in middle of work ... so this is really not finish but i just try add some lights, sky ... for test if its work ... and think something wrong but not sure what to fix first thanks for comments and help! :poly121:

pongstah

Interesting pose. It immediately caught my eye. He's like a bat clinging to the cliff side like that.

lotet

the image looks super compressed and pixely, and then scaled up again, everything has this sort of jagged edge

javi

So some of the major problems I'm seeing are:
- The legs are different sizes.
- Spine is broken. Make the spine flow.

DanglinBob

Im a little confused by the shadowing on the top wing too. It looks like a shadow but there's no source of something that would provide that kind of shadowing, nor any affect on any surrounding item.

Saly23

Thanks a lot to everybody, for comments! I will try to fix it!

dfacto

I did a quick pass to fix just the most major things that bother me when looking at the picture:



-added firelight
-added minor rimlight from the cloudy sky
-brought spine into a smooth curve
-brought bottom shoulder upwards with trapezius muscle as it was not symmetrical with other side
-brought outer eyebrow ridge further down to make face symetrical in perspective and redid the nostril a bit just for fun :P

It's a great dynamic concept and you have a strong base! Keep working on it and pay attention to your lighting!