Looking cool. Very nice model overall. I am finding there are a few things you could fix up though. First is the contrast. You have nice contrast on the upper body but the lower body is a bit mono-value. Second the hair looks a little too soft/rounded. I'm thinking you could add more sharp edges on that. I also noticed the the bangs are symmetrical which is a bit obvious. It might be nice to see asymmetry there. This is all just my opinion but I hope it helps.
Thanks mate. You are certainly rightabout the contrast and symmetry. I know I shouldn't be making excuses I was working with an mage and I guess I stuck with it too much. I will keep this advice in my mind and add my own variety next time !
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Thanks a lot !