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komarik27 · May 2014

Hi guys!
This is my first finished work.
I will be glad to any critique.
Especially your opinion about materias.

EpicBeardMan · May 2014

Materials look pretty good in my opinion, maybe too clean, you could add some scratches here and there, but that's just my preference, nevertheless this render looks awesome.
Just one question: How many polygons does this gun have (together with the bullets)?

komarik27 · May 2014

EpicBeardMan wrote: »

Materials look pretty good in my opinion, maybe too clean, you could add some scratches here and there, but that's just my preference, nevertheless this render looks awesome.
Just one question: How many polygons does this gun have (together with the bullets)?

~4k

Kimon · May 2014

Not bad! Can we see wires?

SladeDigital · May 2014

Would love to see the wires to this baby, and as said before if you managed to add some sacratches and or rust it would bring it into a new level!

Good job though!

komarik27 · May 2014

Nils · May 2014

Looks good. But maybe there could be a bit more variety in the wood. Especially in the spec. It looks a bit plastic. And I agree about adding scratches, makes it more personal.
The metal is nice, maybe a bit on the grey side. Gun metal is usually a bit more on the blueblack side.
Is it based on a real shotgun?

komarik27 · May 2014

Nils wrote: »

Is it based on a real shotgun?

I took this picture for Ref.

Nam.Nguyen · May 2014

the materials look a bit too even though, but overall look good for your "first finished work", keep it up

zicoV · May 2014

Good job dude. It's missing the firing pins though

komarik27 · May 2014

zicoV wrote: »

It's missing the firing pins though

Yea, forgot about it.

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