franchi spas 12 WIP

BI0H0G · Jan 2014

Here is a wip of a franchi spas 12 to test my new pc

Gazu · Jan 2014

Keep it comin!

Bek · Jan 2014

Your edges are quite tight for baking purposes, and if you look at references the handle is much smoother (think about how you would hold it.. what you currently have would be awkward and uncomfortable).

BI0H0G · Jan 2014

what about now

s6 · Jan 2014

That is a step in the right direction, But be sure to pay close attention to your reference and how the model exists in reality.

dazzerfong · Jan 2014

Pistol grip is still too sharp, particularly the end. Apply the subdivision modifier to the receiver too, or introduce more loops to smooth things out yourself.

Also, look at the image below:

Notice how (in the top one, not the bottom one), the pistol grip has some grips or extrusions from it? Model them!

Lastly, I know it's just semantics, but it'll help for you if you rename the meshes to something more relevant.

BI0H0G · Jan 2014

update on the grip and reciver

dazzerfong · Jan 2014

Getting better! Now soften the edges up: if you bake them, it won't turn out nice.

BI0H0G · Jan 2014

here is the stock

dazzerfong · Jan 2014

Turn off perspective viewing or limit the FOV: I can't tell if the stock's too fat or your perspective is screwing it all up.

BI0H0G · Jan 2014

ok here only the stock

dazzerfong · Jan 2014

The skeleton is a bit too thin, and should be rounded out a bit more. Also, pay attention to the folding butt: it's a bit more detailed than that.

BI0H0G · Jan 2014

re-did the stock now

franchi spas 12 WIP

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