franchi spas 12 WIP

BI0H0G

Here is a wip of a franchi spas 12 to test my new pc

Gazu

Keep it comin!

Bek

Your edges are quite tight for baking purposes, and if you look at references the handle is much smoother (think about how you would hold it.. what you currently have would be awkward and uncomfortable).

BI0H0G

what about now

s6

That is a step in the right direction, But be sure to pay close attention to your reference and how the model exists in reality.

dazzerfong

Pistol grip is still too sharp, particularly the end. Apply the subdivision modifier to the receiver too, or introduce more loops to smooth things out yourself.

Also, look at the image below:



Notice how (in the top one, not the bottom one), the pistol grip has some grips or extrusions from it? Model them!

Lastly, I know it's just semantics, but it'll help for you if you rename the meshes to something more relevant.

BI0H0G

update on the grip and reciver

dazzerfong

Getting better! Now soften the edges up: if you bake them, it won't turn out nice.

BI0H0G

here is the stock

dazzerfong

Turn off perspective viewing or limit the FOV: I can't tell if the stock's too fat or your perspective is screwing it all up.

BI0H0G

ok here only the stock

dazzerfong

The skeleton is a bit too thin, and should be rounded out a bit more. Also, pay attention to the folding butt: it's a bit more detailed than that.

BI0H0G

re-did the stock now