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Low Poly SignPost

ArtisticTiger
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Finished a a few days ago just didn't upload it until today, kind of forgot about it.
My second official model

Maya.
Photoshop.
Mouse & Keyboard.
Critics are welcome and encouraged Thanks for viewing!:)
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  • Goat Justice
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    Goat Justice polycounter lvl 10
    The text on the sign is similar enough to its background value and color wise that its kinda getting lost in the wood texture. It might help to try an outline or different color to make it pop more. Could maybe go slightly larger with it as well.
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  • ArtisticTiger
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    ArtisticTiger polycounter lvl 5
    k thanks didnt notice that before lol, will edit asap
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  • SaboR1996
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    SaboR1996 polycounter lvl 8
    Im watching that exact same tutorial haha, That looks great!
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  • Bartalon
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    Bartalon polycounter lvl 12
    You might want to invest in a small drawing tablet, it will help you out immensely when drawing in the finer details!
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  • DWalker
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    DWalker
    The rock texture size is really excessive given the relative size & importance; a 256 or even 128 would work as well.

    On the sign, over a third of your polys seem to be on the rope, and a large portion of your texture is on the rope as well; this really is a bit much for an accent piece. I'd have spent more of those polygons defining the post & the sign.

    The connection between the sign the post is awkward; the sign should either be nailed in front of the post, or should pass through it.
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  • supremedalek925
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    supremedalek925 polycounter lvl 10
    I agree with Goat Justice; the first thing I noticed was that the text on the sign doesn't stand out and it almost looks like wet blood or something the way it is right now. The other thing I notice is that the wood grain looks too large for the scale of the sign to me; notice how fine the markings in the wood are in the image DWalker posted. Other than that, it looks good to me. Keep us posted.
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