FPS MP5 Model [TB2]

Javibcln · Dec 2013

Hi polycount! I made this MP5 theese days, and I wanted to share it with you! Let me know how do you feel about it!

Low Poly:

Thanks for viewing!

dpadam450 · Dec 2013

While the texturing is good, the original high poly materials look more realistic to me. Also, the texture seems to have just a bit too much contrast with the white grunge spots being just a bit too white.

Dimfist · Dec 2013

Low poly looks great. Definitely work on the spec some!

Javibcln · Dec 2013

Thanks for the feedback guys! I worked on the spec and the diffuse a little bit, let me know if this is more what you meant:

It looks good to me now

Shrike · Dec 2013

It looks nice, prefered the first version of the handguard tho, I think the only problem is the lighting, its very even and it just dosnt pop. Your highpoly has better contrast, just put a stronger light over it in addition id say

Edit: Its really hard to see your texture with the small image and current lighting

silkroadgame · Dec 2013

Good looking!

Nam.Nguyen · Dec 2013

Looking good !, but still a bit flat compared with the HP version, If the AO map didn't give you the high contrast look, you can try to paint it by hand

Kosai106 · Dec 2013

You need to loosen up your edges on the high-poly, as they will otherwise be completely invisible on the low-poly bake. (As you can see.)

Fatter edges on the high-poly gives you some very nice highlights on the low-poly, which might not be realistic, but it's still necessary to really sell your models to the viewer. If that makes sense.

DWalker · Dec 2013

The wear looks too uniform; concentrate it on exposed areas (e.g corners) and areas that are handled frequently (e.g. safety & magazine release).

The rings for the sling seem far too bright - they are typically blackened. Unless you plan on adding a sling, I'd remove them entirely.

Javibcln · Dec 2013

Thanks for that great feedback guys! I tried to make all that you said in this update, and I dont know if Im doing good, but it keeps looking better and better thanks to your critiques

This is the new version:

What is your oppinion now? Thanks again!

Yilativ · Dec 2013

Wow, nice, now it looks better, I its a great work

dpadam450 · Dec 2013

To me the forward grip is too bumpy. http://www.a-human-right.com/smg/MP5.JPG

Are you using a gloss map? If so I would make that portion less contrast and more towards white. Looks like the specular exponent is just too high making the specular too tight.

dazzerfong · Dec 2013

You have a bit of normal errors around the lower receiver, and the pistol grip looks a bit too thin. Other than that, think you nailed it!

Javibcln · Jan 2014

I accidentally deleted all the project images on my portfolio and lost them while I was updating the images and video... Well there it is so that you can see it. I hope you like the presentation. Thanks again for all your help

[Deleted User] · Jan 2014

Great work man i like the presentation and the final result

FPS MP5 Model [TB2]

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