First complete character:Please critique
Hello Polycount Community
I am currently a student at AIE and made this character a few months ago. This is my first complete character (Concept-Render) and i would appreciate any constructive criticism you could provide. A few things for me to mention first are that i planed on sculpting hair for this character but ran out of time so just made a basic mesh ponytail, the second is that i made the mistake of mainly sculpting the characters face from one angle most of the time instead of rotating the camera around in zbrush as i was learning zbrush along side making this character. I spent the majourity of my time trying to get the body of my character to look nice and feminine but i spent the least amount of time on the hands and feet. My characters name is Titania and her theme is the Goddess of Moons.
Ok Polycount fire away.......:)
I am currently a student at AIE and made this character a few months ago. This is my first complete character (Concept-Render) and i would appreciate any constructive criticism you could provide. A few things for me to mention first are that i planed on sculpting hair for this character but ran out of time so just made a basic mesh ponytail, the second is that i made the mistake of mainly sculpting the characters face from one angle most of the time instead of rotating the camera around in zbrush as i was learning zbrush along side making this character. I spent the majourity of my time trying to get the body of my character to look nice and feminine but i spent the least amount of time on the hands and feet. My characters name is Titania and her theme is the Goddess of Moons.
Ok Polycount fire away.......:)
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I don't know if this is because of the angle, but her fingers and feet look a bit too small. And maybe her hairline could be fixed up. And maybe her hair color should be changed up since it kinda clashes with the rest of her body.
That's really all I've got to say on this. I really like that glowing effect.
Pyrant: Thanks for the complement. Yeah your right the hands and feet are a bit small after looking at real life images, I will keep this in mind in the future I think it was partly to working off my own concept art (Below) which wasn't very anatomically correct to start with.
Low Odor: Thanks, the next couple of characters i do will defiantly be based of a concept artists work or real life reference images from 3DSK. I went through my model and listed everything that was anatomically wrong with the model that i could see. Picture Below
JadeEyePanda: Thanks, would you normally put that the skin shade information in the Diffuse map or spec? Because when i was texturing the diffuse was pretty flat and i put a red tinge in the spec map and contrasted the color of the skin but it didn't really work to well. I understand how a spec map works but i sometimes get confused on where to put certain information whether it be diffuse or spec. What would you do?
Thanks Again.
http://www.polycount.com/forum/showthread.php?t=91912
I just need a piece of work from earlier this year critiqued as part of a school assessment. Thanks