Strangely I like the untextured hair better... If I where you I'd have a look into a more stylized approach, but not super stylize., I think it might suit her better perhaps.
The tops of the ears are so thin, grab some reference. I would also make the neck a bit thicker, I know it is supposed to be thin but it's almost a bowling ball on a toothpick. Lastly, push in the eyes, and add a second layer on top to give proper reflection/refraction.
That last picture is the Old version of her, the 2 head shots are new. Everything will be updated, i was just trying to show what she look like before.
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