Feedback Needed On WW2 Tank, British Cromwell Model - University Assignment
Hi guys,
I am asking for feedback on my work associated with the creation of my British Cromwell tank. I am open to any criticism as it is useful for both my written report element and for myself to learn from. This is my first attempt at being in a modelling pipeline, and my first proper 3D Model so please don't be too brutal if there is anything criminally wrong with it. Thanks a lot for your time!
High-Poly Tank:
Low-Poly Tank:
Normal Map:
Diffuse Map:
Specular Map:
I am asking for feedback on my work associated with the creation of my British Cromwell tank. I am open to any criticism as it is useful for both my written report element and for myself to learn from. This is my first attempt at being in a modelling pipeline, and my first proper 3D Model so please don't be too brutal if there is anything criminally wrong with it. Thanks a lot for your time!
High-Poly Tank:
Low-Poly Tank:
Normal Map:
Diffuse Map:
Specular Map:
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UDK Beauty Renders:
Your work is pretty good but at the end your tank seems like a toy.
I think this feling came from the Grass size but not only. I think the green of your tank is a little bit flashy and some part are a little bit bigger than they are suppose to be.
Add dirt on your tank is a good idea why don't you add bullets impact and burn on the canon?
You have utilised your UV packing space well, I see alot of people from Staffs leaving it fairly empty.
I have noticed you could use more detail on your specular map to really convey more detail of your grime, maybe add scratches around the edges of corners where wear would more likely occur.
Textures are good, need more focus and thought into placement of rust and dirt,
Specular is too shiny, looks a bit like plastic rather than metal
SHould overlay metal scratches into the specular to get some inconsistency in texture not just flat
OTherwise good work
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