Shotgun

iammalte · Apr 2013

Sawed off shotgun

Hi there, I want to show you my 3d asset. Feedback and criticism are welcome

Thanks!

Hayden Zammit · Apr 2013

Looks great. What did you render this in?

Really like that second shot.

iammalte · Apr 2013

Hi Hayden Zammit,

Thanks for posting, I rendered the shotgun in marmoset toolbag.:thumbup:

DWalker · Apr 2013

The pistol grip is very blocky, and the woodgrain doesn't match the quality of the metal barrel. This lupara seems fairly similar to your design:

When fired, the shell doesn't expand as much as yours has - the barrel limits the final diameter.

iammalte · Apr 2013

Hi DWalker,

Your critics are very helpful to me, thank you!

genwu · Apr 2013

Quality work! Would love to see your breakdowns sometime.

Chap1400 · Apr 2013

This is a really great model! I can't really think of much to criticise with this. Perhaps the golden trim on the model could be altered a little. It looks a bit too yellow, bright and clean compared to the rest. This kind of colour and finish might look more fitting:

Great job anyway!

Joltya · Apr 2013

Cool piece! Love the style and colors! The only thing I'm not too sure about is the weaver rail at the top. Those are pretty modern and it doesn't seem like it fits on an older weapon like that.

iammalte · Apr 2013

@genw

Thanks! Lets see by tomorrow I can grab some states and a few screenshots (wire, sculpt etc.)

@Chap1400

Thank you! You are right, the gold is too clean. I wish I had time to edit the wood and the gold

iammalte · Apr 2013

@JoltZero

Thanks for your feedback! Your'e right about the style issue old/modern. Its kinda hard to create a nice model without a concept but your right because there are a lot of references on the internet

MeshModeler · Apr 2013

lets see some flats

iammalte · Apr 2013

Chap1400 · Apr 2013

Fantastic!

Boozebeard · Apr 2013

Really great. Would just reiterate the points others have made; wood quality doesn't really match the quality of the metal work, the grip is way too square to be comfortable and given the weapon looks a bit ages the golden trims could use work, especially in the cavities.

Very bioshock infinite

iammalte · Apr 2013

@Chap1400

Thanks

@Boozebeard

Your feedback is great! Thank you! I want to give the wood a 2nd try if I found the time.

Thank you all for the critics!!

iammalte · Apr 2013

For everybody who is interested in here are a few things I`ve done.

Shotgun

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