Asian Child , Game character

leChatNoir · Jan 2013

Helloo polycounters,

Here's my latest character piece that I 've been working on in and out lately. Don't feel like doing any more changes as I kinda grew tired of it. Face based on a Korean child actress.

Realtime renders in Marmoset.

HighRes Clay renders:

Cheers!

satrio · Jan 2013

Very clean! Good job!

BoBo_the_seal · Jan 2013

Very well done and I love the presentation.

- BoBo

retleks · Jan 2013

Great job, I really like the clay renders. Nose features seem a bit too sharp compared to the realism you seem to be shooting for with the rest of it, but it's still a lovely piece, good job.

tac0m · Jan 2013

Great job man, anatomy looks proper and clean and the cloth folds don't look like melting wax

Good piece

Kot_Leopold · Jan 2013

Marvelous job!

ceebee · Jan 2013

This is rad dude, great job

EiGHT · Jan 2013

Amazing work.
Dem clay renders!

Fieldscarecrow · Jan 2013

Very cool! I trust you've seen 'the man from nowhere'?!

one of my favourite films

that's what I recognise her from.

praetor187 · Jan 2013

This is really cool very clean texture work, nice and simple to but a lot of character. Great job

Makkon · Jan 2013

Wonderful style, and fantastic execution!

Goten-trunk · Jan 2013

nice work buddy dont know much abt characters modeling but this looks nice to me

Torch · Jan 2013

Excellent work!

leChatNoir · Jan 2013

Everybody, thank you very much for the comments and crits. Really appreciate it.

@Hugh: Lmao.

@Fieldscarecrow: You re pretty much spot on. Love that movie but I first saw the actress in A brand new life, really interesting too by the way.

@dustinbrown: Nice observation. Tried to kinda exaggerate this feature because it is so prominent and I thought this characteristic makes the face so interesting. Here is some of the ref I used + face sculpt:

Again, thank you all!

Gestalt · Jan 2013

Nice clean work. Kids are tough, very clean, low on noise and don't follow classic proportions, so kudos.

Maybe fill out the top lip just a tad more, right now it looks a little rabbity, but I'd say it works with the overall shading and style if that's what you're going for. Not too much to crit on, good job!

Only suggestion is I'd say you don't have to do as much with the diffuse around the nose, the shader is already doing a lot and right now it's a little messy. Maybe soften the diffuse of the face in general (notice in the refs she has very even coloring). On a personal note I think it'd be great to see more movement in the hair like in the last reference pic, I think it'd help make the piece a little less masculine. Fuller cheeks and reducing the chin a bit would also help for that.

7mch · Jan 2013

It's incredibly difficult to find reference for adolessent anatomy. You've nailed the proportions. Kudos!

chrisradsby · Jan 2013

Very nice work, lovely clayrender at the end. Love the timid pose, great work overall!

Blaisoid · Jan 2013

looks good!

lower lip seems like one solid piece though.
check this out:

if you look at photos you posted you can see a little bit of shade in the middle of the lower lip. it's pretty subtle but it does hint at lip being made of two pieces.

onionhead_o · Jan 2013

this is awesome, first glance i can already tell shes the girl from "A Man from nowhere'.

RobSamuel · Jan 2013

I really like it, though the folds on the back of the jumper look too sharp for the material, especially in the realtime images.

Mask_Salesman · Jan 2013

Great stuff dude, love the leaves.

Di$array · Jan 2013

Fantastic work you have there man and it's a great timd, carming pose. But to nitpick i'd say I agree about the lip as [people have pointed out above but I also think the folds on the kid's back are too strong and conflicts with the front folds. Maybe you could tone it down and give its a loser or baggy feel to suit the front.

Asian Child , Game character

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