[MIXAMO CONTEST] - archer

ejeet31 · Jul 2012

this is my first time joining such contest...i really need comments so i can improve my work...thank you..

Moogart · Jul 2012

nice! looks good so far, ejeet!
I suggest you put some curves, make her more sexy.

Keep it up!

kenkennang · Jul 2012

nice! one ejeet! keep it up bro!

Tits · Jul 2012

Looks really nice

Looking forward to see more!

ejeet31 · Jul 2012

here's the update for the lower part...currently sculpting the boots now..

ejeet31 · Jul 2012

here's my update for today...

ejeet31 · Jul 2012

Texelion · Jul 2012

You really should make the waist and the neck thinier, and the face more feminine. On the close shot I thought she was a guy.

Tits · Jul 2012

I do agree with The advice Texelion just gave you,
Other then that pretty sick work!

alphajayel · Jul 2012

I agree with Texelion. ..you may want to relax the folds on the armpits as well. They look too tensed

but as usual, Awesome work! ----just like cooking!

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zorrenhimself · Jul 2012

you are doing a very good job doing those details. But yeah,fix you curves. Check out babelab. Just google it out.

ejeet31 · Jul 2012

neck and facial features revised....

nechnechmo · Jul 2012

Nice one, Ejeet! I agree with Texelion. Make her waist more thinner and add some curves. Look for demon hunter for reference.

boybawang · Jul 2012

same here. the sexiness curves must not disappear. when it comes to a female assassin.

Di$array · Jul 2012

It's coming along nicely but the suggestions above would make a massive improvement. I'd also like to point out that the hood is too large for the head. Currently it reads as if its floating. I would also maybe add a shoulder pad on one shoulder to add some additional interest into the silhouette.

I've done a quick paint over in paint with a laptop touch pad which nearlly broke me. Hope it helps.

ejeet31 · Jul 2012

revised waist........thanks for all critics... it really helps me a lot.. ..

Evanescfan · Jul 2012

Lookin good

mix · Jul 2012

looking good indeed! keep it up

ejeet31 · Aug 2012

here's my update for today...hard to find time to finish this but i will finish this no matter what....XD

Gemstigma · Aug 2012

yup Silhouette is very important,and great work.. can't wait for the final output...

ellie · Aug 2012

looks good please continue............

ejeet31 · Aug 2012

here my update.....base color WIP..

my videocard is unusable now..hehe...i guess i cant pass this...

its a great experience... ^^

jeebs · Aug 2012

I really like this one

great work so far

greyskill · Aug 2012

I like it. I hope that you finish this even if not for this contest.

Sorry bout your graphics card, having a non-working computer really stinks..

ejeet31 · Sep 2012

since i dont have video card...i decided to make it 2d look...like naruto game rendering.....2 toned shadowing...

joshua1:8 · Sep 2012

I like her tattoo, nice work sir.

Gemstigma · Sep 2012

wow,,you still did make it... congrats...

jeebs · Sep 2012

I knew it would turn out great. congrats

ejeet31 · Sep 2012

here's a sample render using mormoset...this time i used normals... BTW thanks for the comments...

Goeddy · Sep 2012

dude you should definetly adjust your render settings.

your model is awesome, but the renders look like i forgot to put my glasses on.
maby its something with your DOF settings. or you could try to add just a little sharpen.
and also get rid of the white plane.
shes not even standing on it, so there is no point in adding that in.

gues its too late for the contest now, but do yourself a favor and adjust your render settings so this doesnt look like an upscaled PS2 screenshot, but more like next gen.

ejeet31 · Sep 2012

here's my other work..
ejeetespiritu.blogspot.com..
and here's my email
ejeetespiritu@ymail.com

[MIXAMO CONTEST] - archer

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