Forgotten Asylum

Dazz3r · Jul 2012

Hi guys I'm just going into my 3rd year of Uni and I've spent the last 7 months working at TT Fusion as a Prop Artist, this is what I have been doing in my spare time. Thought I would post for you guys to rip to pieces after all, you do have the highest standards, I'm used to you now though so I can take it!! :P

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SuperFranky · Jul 2012

there is something really wrong with your texturing

Dazz3r · Jul 2012

care to tell me?

SuperFranky · Jul 2012

well, walls look really bad, too bland and flat, overall wrong
metal on the bed is too uninteresting, black and shiny
sink also too specular, texture looks more like an icing on a cake, if you understand me

Cibo · Jul 2012

The stones in the wall are to clean.
Because the surface is 1-2 cm above the stones so you need edges and shadows, influence not only the diffuse map and make a bumpmap too.

Dazz3r · Jul 2012

the walls yeah thats an on going issue, I did a tutorial on vertex texture painting in UDK thinking I paint plaster on bricks and you're right it does come off flat, although I thought I did a good job with my tileable bricks, even used a uv offest node for parallax mapping to make them pop out that bit more?

Yeah I rushed the bed, gonna re-do that when I have time. Cheers matey

Dazz3r · Jul 2012

tutorial I followed for the walls..
http://http://www.chrisalbeluhn.com/UDK_Advanced_Vertex_Painting.html

SuperFranky · Jul 2012

and i think bricks are too small in scale for this type of room, who build walls like that?

Dazz3r · Jul 2012

Actually the romans did Frank, but you're right, whole project is a bit too rushed, more i look more im might just start again

SuperFranky · Jul 2012

well, why do you think Caesar died? because of those bricks, i tell ya

just kidding, anyway, good luck with project

A.M.E · Jul 2012

This is a good start, I quite like the layout for the beds with the curtain rails against the pillars. Though, I agree the bricks do look too clean.

Dazz3r · Jul 2012

Thanks

yeah ignore the walls, consider them a WIP, actually I should have put WIP tags on the title.

Forgotten Asylum

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