The Suited Man

Donavonyoung · Feb 2012

Here is a character I am working on called the Suited man. Only a few hours in so I am looking for some crits on it.

Illusive · Feb 2012

the clothing folds really need some more work (pants especially) they look like you just guessed how they should look and they don't look natural at all

pangarang · Feb 2012

Would love to see some concepts. Other than that, the thing that jumps out at me the most is the pant wrinkles. I don't imagine the wrinkles to be that large and loose, more sharp and tight I'd think. Crotchal region seems to be riding a little low. But yes, otherwise good stuff!

Donavonyoung · Feb 2012

Hey guys here is an update, haven't had much time to work on it, but I reworked some of the folds in clothing and now he has a head. I added some gloves to his hands, thanks for the responses guys. I really appreciate it, and sorry I am not working from a concept currently.

strobelite · Feb 2012

I like this! The shirt is looking good to me, but the pants are still looking a bit strange, like it's really tight in the crotch haha. I would definitely try to find a reference for the pants! Looks great though with the added head and gloves.

Donavonyoung · Feb 2012

Yeah I keep looking at images of slacks, but I am having a hard time capturing the way slacks actually flow, so for now I am just frustrated with them, and attempted to light them on fire virtually. He also has a hat now, and a crowbar, but I'll post that update later when I have them a bit more fleshed out. I'll keep hammering the pants. Thanks for the crit.

Di$array · Feb 2012

Well he's taking shape. I done a quick little paint over to get the main creases flow across to you. Try not to let lose clothing appear to tight on a character. Let its bulge out in places to add an interesting silhouette to the piece.

Prtofdacrowd · Feb 2012

So as i wondered into this thread hoping to help, I have to leave cause Lex Luthor wont escape my mind.....

Donavonyoung · Feb 2012

Reworked the fold more, and it looks a lot better, Also retopped, and unwrapped, will be texturing soon.

Fomori · Feb 2012

Looks pretty cool! I like the arms and hands. Working nicely. Proportionally his head is looking a little small to me. But if you're going for the more super hero proportions then it's fair enough I suppose.

CandyStripes05 · Feb 2012

i like it, not really commenting to crit but more to follow along : )

Donavonyoung · Feb 2012

Thanks for the support and crits guys. You are the driving force on this project. Ran into a few technical bumps this weekend, but I am gonna keep plugging on it.

The Suited Man

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