First female character attempt

FruitBomb · Jan 2012

Hey guys this is my first female character im trying.
Im starting on the head.
here is my ref and my screenshot
What do you guys think?

I started from a cube instead of a sphere.
I was going to use a geosphere but it didnt seem practical.

Stinger88 · Jan 2012

nice start. I think you need a little more definition around the eye and nose....and lips...and maybe the arms could do with a bit more length. Legs are a bit thin as well.

Oh, and you forgot the cape.

passerby · Jan 2012

needs moar cowbell

Snader · Jan 2012

I think you need to optimize a bit. It says you're using 5633 triangles, while this model can be with just 192 tris.

sltrOlsson · Jan 2012

Soooooo, are you actually going to this or are you just trolling? (Sorry for being an arse, but I actually wonder)

mr_ace · Jan 2012

you've really captured her silhouette beautifully

SnaFuBAR · Jan 2012

this is a well rounded character.

Kot_Leopold · Jan 2012

Not much of a start here, really. If I were you, I wouldn't even bother posting a screenshot at such an early stage.

StevenEgan · Jan 2012

You have to do a tut!

garriola83 · Jan 2012

kinda unusual to post a sphere and call it a character. i agree with kot_leopold, post something not so early. i always look forward to other character artists wok on here.

ps. you have 3K polys while im seeing 64 polys + the plane

dinfet · Jan 2012

this thread is a classic, I'm laughing over here!

achillesian · Jan 2012

garriola83 wrote: »

ps. you have 3K polys while im seeing 64 polys + the plane

Model was made with invisible ink. :poly142: SO PRO.

eazy · Jan 2012

SnaFuBAR wrote: »

this is a well rounded character.

lol'd. trolling the troll = classy. but this is all in good fun, riiight? is anyone who's taking this thread seriously?

JR · Jan 2012

garriola83 wrote: »

ps. you have 3K polys while im seeing 64 polys + the plane

It's a magical model. It's invisible to anyone who was not fit for the gaming industry, or who is unpardonably stupid.

I'd say lovely start, FruitBomb! Just pay attention at her cape, the way you are doing it's too simetrical and unrealistic. Exagerate a bit more on that left folders, and you´re on the right track! :P